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Persuasive
Research Paper

"The important thing is not to stop questioning."
Albert Einstein
A research paper requires that we focus on a particular
subject, develop a claim or thesis, and support our positions with convincing
evidence: background information, facts, statistics, descriptions, and results
of interviews or surveys.
For a research paper, use the same techniques and strategies we have studied
earlier - remembering, observing, evaluating, and investigating. The paper
should present your view of the topic, but read, think, and reflect
on the topic and on the sources you have read before you construct your thesis
statement.
The research paper is a project that will take more of thought and
effort than the papers we have written to this point, and the student might feel
overwhelmed at times in planning and drafting the paper. But a thoughtful process
leads to a thoughtful project. As writer Antoine de Saint Exupery said,
"You know you've achieved perfection in design, not when you have nothing
more to add, but when you have nothing more to take away."
As our text suggests, avoid "ready-made pro-con
subjects such as abortion, drinking age, drugs, and euthanasia" (Reid 468). I would also add to this list gun
control and the death penalty.
Physical requirements:
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The paper should be at least six pages in length, and formatted
in proper MLA style.
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Use a standard font (nothing unusual or cute
please, this will be a formal paper) in a ten to twelve point
size.
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The paper must reference at least 7 current journal articles referenced. Remember that
"works cited" means that quotations from these these articles are
used in the paper.
A web page and/or a book may be cited, but these should not be primary sources.
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Process requirements: Realize that a project like this takes
time, and at times you will feel that you are not making progress. To help you
adjust to a new pace, begin by keeping a research notebook, and outlining a
realistic timetable for the paper.
Research Notebook: Use a loose-leaf
notebook. Divide the notebook into four sections: research log, bibliography,
notes from sources (including photocopies of articles), and drafts and ideas.
Taking Notes
 | Record complete bibliographical information in the bibliography section
of your research notebook. |
 | Record notes in the source notes section of your research notebook. |
 | Photocopy important sources (articles) for later rereading and reference.
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 | As you read sources and take notes, record your own reactions and ideas
in the drafts-and-ideas section of your research notebook. |
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Choosing a Subject
You might choose a subject that you already know well, through personal
experience or research, or a topic about which you would like to learn more.
Reread your journal entries for ideas, and explore topics that you have
already written about and find another aspect of the topic to write about.
Narrowing and Focusing Your Subject
Limit your topic by focusing on a particular research question. Your
question may lead to a thesis statement
or claim that you will demonstrate in your research paper. Limit your paper by
considering your purpose and audience. In addition, consider the kinds of
claims you might want to make about your topic:
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 | Claims of Fact |
 | Claims of Cause and Effect |
 | Claims of Value |
 | Claims of Policy |
Ask the wh questions:
 | Who? |
 | What? |
 | When? |
 | Where? |
 | Why? |
Evaluating Library Sources
 | Sources should be relevant to your subject, purpose, and audience. |
 | Sources should be current, particularly if your topic is scientific or
technical in nature. |
 | Sources should be reliable, free of bias and inaccuracies. |
Background Information and General Reference
You might get a general overview about your topic by looking in
encyclopedias, dictionaries, biographies, or other general sources. Realize,
however, that these sources help you find general information about your topic.
Encyclopedias, dictionaries, biographies, or other general sources shouldn't be used as sources in your paper.
The Online Catalog: Search Strategy
You will be searching for your topic by key words in our online databases,
as you have practiced doing throughout the semester. One way to find key words
associated with your topic is to look at the Library of Congress Subject
Headings in the library. In addition, you can narrow or expand your topic by
using Boolean search strategies, that is, combining terms with and, or,
or not to narrow or expand your findings. For a tutorial on Boolean
searches, visit ADAM:
Boolean Search Tips from Surrey Institute of Art & Design.
Shaping
Although the drafting process may be overwhelming at this point, master the
project by breaking up the information into manageable doses. First of all,
reconsider your purpose and thesis. Reread your own notes and especially your
draft sections from your research notebook. Then answer the following
questions:
 | What is your general subject? |
 | What aspect of your general subject is most interesting to you now? What
question will you answer or explain? |
 | Is your purpose primarily to inform, explain, evaluate, describe a
problem and propose a solution, or to argue a claim? |
 | What thesis, claim, or proposal do you want to impress upon your
readers? |
 | Analyze your audience. How can you interest them in your subject? What
aspects of your collected data are most appropriate for you audience? |
Shaping Strategies
 | Review strategies for shaping that are appropriate for your particular
purpose. |
 | Explain to a friend or classmate your purpose, audience, and working
thesis. |
 | Try freewriting, looping, or clustering. |
 | Reread your notes and drafts. |
 | Take a break. |
 | Try branching or treeing your main ideas. |
 | Build a working outline. Organize your notes based on your outline. |
Drafting
As you draft, use your outline as a guide, but don't worry if the natural
flow of your writing takes you in other directions. Reread your material and
decide whether you have strayed from the topic or introduced a new, welcome
dimension to the project.
Using Sources
Use your sources accurately, fairly, and honestly. You must cite a source
for any fact or bit of information that is not general knowledge. You
do not need to indicate a source for your own ideas, but if you find a source
that agrees with your idea, cite that source. Citing a source that supports
your idea lends additional credibility to the essay. For more information on
how and why to document sources, see Documenting
Sources from the George Mason University Writing Center.
How to Cite Sources
You will use Modern Language Association (MLA) style. According to MLA
style, the in-text citation contains the author and page number of your source
(Torres 50). For information on MLA documentation style, follow these links:
Identify Cited References
 | Identify in the text the person or source of the fact, paraphrased idea,
or quotation. |
 | If you cite the author in your sentence, the parentheses will contain
only the page reference. |
 | Use block format for quotations of five lines or more. |
 | Vary your introductions to quotations. |
 | Edit quotations when necessary to condense or clarify. |
How to Avoid Plagiarism
Be honest and give credit for the work of others by carefully documenting
all facts, ideas, charts, diagrams, and actual phrases or sentences borrowed
from your sources.
Revising and Peer Review
When rereading your paper, be flexible enough to identify weaknesses in
your paper such as missing data or passages that no longer seem relevant.
Correct them or delete them before submitting for peer review. Remember,
though, that you are the expert at this point. Don't incorporate suggestions
that you feel would not make your paper better.
TIMETABLE
Monday, November 6th: Library
Assignment
Wednesday, November 8th:
Working
Bibliography, topic pitch, paragraph
Monday, November 13th:
Tentative paper plan or outline (see page 10 &11 in Hacker)
Wednesday, November 15th:
Two pages typewritten and Formal Outline (see Hacker page 11-12)
Wednesday, November 22:
first draft
Wednesday, November 29:
final draft due
 | Write a paragraph: You should have considered your topic and claim well enough that today you
can write (without notes) a paragraph about your plans for the paper.
You should have some specific judgments and details to offer about your
paper. Topic paragraph, 20 points. |
 | Pitch your topic: Discuss your topic with your peers and see if it will
"fly." Consider doing some outlining and prewriting, and keeping this material in
a Research
Notebook, which is discussed in your text. Topic discussion: 20 points. |
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 | Bibliography and Four Articles:
Have a nicely formatted (and typed) bibliography
with you today for review, and two complete pages of
typewritten material. You should have at least
four articles today. (Typed bibliography, articles, and
two pages 30 points). I'll
return the paragraph written in class on Thursday, and if the topic has any
problems, I'll address those in writing. You may/should make some
adjustments to your focus if that has been suggested.
Otherwise, after
today, you may
not make a major change to your topic without losing the points you have
earned thus far on this assignment. |
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First Draft: Your first
draft is due in class (typed and complete, in a folder with all prewriting and
sources) at 2pm sharp. Students who arrive
late with their papers will lose 1/2 credit for the day.
You receive points both for participating in peer review (30), and for having
your first draft completed (50). If you do not have a complete rough
draft, you will not be allowed to participate in peer review.
Monday, December 5th
Final Draft: Make necessary
corrections on your first draft, and submit today
at 2:00 sharp, secured in a folder with all prewriting, sources, earlier
drafts, and peer comments. If you expect to have an illness, injury, major romantic
breakup, or death in your family that week, plan on submitting your paper in
ADVANCE. Students who arrive late with their
papers will not receive full credit. Final Draft by deadline:
50 points.
Points possible on paper: 500
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