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Explanatory Essay

Due date for Final Draft:  November 1st

(see interim deadlines on Agendas Page and outlined below)

On page 307 of your text, you will find instructions for writing an "Explanatory" Essay.  You may choose your own topic, but make certain your topic is NARROW, and one with which you would like to live for the next several weeks.  Consider researching and learning about a topic in your field of interest -- in other words, learn more about your future career.  You may also follow the suggestions in the text under "Choosing a Subject." 

Physical requirements:

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Your essay should be four to six pages in length, and formatted in proper MLA style. 

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A works cited page is required.  You must have at least 6 current journal articles referenced in your paper.  Remember that works cited means you have actually cited these articles in your paper.  You may also refer to and cite a web page and/or a book, but these should not be your primary sources.

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You should use a standard font (nothing unusual or cute please, this will be a formal paper) in a ten to twelve point size.  

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Double space only -- no single or triple spacing in your paper.

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Make certain NOW that you have enough paper and ink to print out your final copy.  

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Your final copy should not be submitted with poor print or ink quality.

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On the day you turn in your final draft, you should also email your document to me as an attachment.  I won't be able to grade your paper physically until you have sent me the emailed attachment.

Process requirements:  Follow the text's suggestions (page 308) for "collecting."  You should include the following pre-writing materials when you turn your essay.  They will also be due for review in class at intervals during the writing process.

Ask (and answer) the following questions about your tentative subject:

bulletWhat is it?
bulletHow is it done or how does it occur?
bulletWhy does it happen and what are its effects?

Visualize your topic: by branching, mind mapping, creating a flow chart, generate a storyboard, or by drawing your topic.  Use either the very left-brained design on page 309, or the less restrictive right-brain design on page 310.  Make sure your drawing suggests details, questions, or relationships that may be important to your paper.  Here is another example:

Observing, remembering, reading, and investigating are other good ways to collect information. If you use outside sources, be sure to make photocopies of all library sources. Download or print all of your Internet sources.

 Freewriting:  You may do some freewriting about your topic.  

Content Requirements:  Your essay should contain the writing elements you have encountered in your text, in The Perfect Storm, and during our class discussions. 

The following are six important features of clear explanations:

bulletGetting the reader's attention and stating the thesis.
bulletDefining key terms and describing what something is.
bulletAnalyzing and defining by describing, comparing, classifying, and giving examples.
bulletIdentifying the steps in a process and showing how each step relates to the overall process.
bulletDescribing causes and effects and showing why certain causes lead to specific effects.
bulletSupporting explanations with specific evidence.

The introduction of an explaining essay usually has the following elements:

bulletLead-In - an example, description, startling statement, statistic, short narrative, allusion, or quotation to get the reader's interest and focus on the topic you will explain
bulletThesis - statement of the main idea
bulletEssay Map - a sentence or part of a sentence that lists, in the order in which the essay discusses them, the main subtopics of the essay

Body paragraphs constitute the bulk of the explanatory essay and often contain the following:

bulletTopic sentences - sentences that articulate the main idea in the paragraph
bulletUnity - a focus on a single idea
bulletCoherence - a smooth passage from one idea to the next

Due Dates:

10/23 Pitch your topic to me and your peers.

Bring your ideas from your library assignment.  Be able to tell us why YOU would like to research and write about this topic.  Also tell us why your topic will "appeal" to your readers' interest! Write this information in a paragraph, and include a catchy, "spiffy" title.  Your title should be specific.

10/25:  Summary of an article from research for your paper. 

              Two typed pages and four articles printed out. 

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Your articles should have marks and notations about what information you will include in your paper. 

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If you've had any second thoughts, today is the last day to change your topic.

October 30th:   First draft due for peer review.  50 points

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Meeting this deadline and participating in peer review is part of your grade for this paper.  

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Your first draft should be typed and should include your works cited.  

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Affix it in a three prong report cover (no plastic, no binders).  

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Include your prewriting and at least four articles.  

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Material from your articles which has been cited in your paper should be highlighted and marked so it can easily be found by readers.

October 25th:  Final draft due.  Fasten your material in your report cover in the following order:

  1. Final draft and works cited.

  2. Rough draft with comments and works cited

  3. Four articles which are your primary sources.  A paper which primarily cites an article which is not included will not be accepted.  A paper which uses a book or website as one of the primary sources will not be accepted (except under special circumstances -- see me if you think you have one). It helps your teacher if you place your articles in alphabetical order (by author) and affix a post-it note in the outside margin showing the author's name.

  4. Your prewriting materials and any other work.

  5. Email your document file to me as an attachment.  Since I'll have your articles and other items in your folder, I just need your essay emailed.  If you have problems doing the attachment, just cut and paste the paper into an email.

Late papers will not receive full credit.

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